The Blog of Persuasion

Eportfolio reflection

Kristin:

From reading this blog it is obvious that Kristin is very good at writting. The imitation excersise that she did was very interesting and shows her writting off well. I could tell from reading the first draft of her first paper to reading the final draft of her third paper that her writting has become more descriptive, I could see how good her writting has become.

John:

The last two reading responses didn't show up, which was upsetting because I wanted to see what he wrote. Something I noticed in John's writing is the fact that in both the first paper and the third paper John mentioned his English teacher from high school.

 Helen:

I noticed when going through Helen's reading responses that the wrong imitation excersise was put into her blog. One thing I noticed in Helen's writing from the first draft of the first paper to the final draft of the third paper was that her paragraphs became smaller.

Amanda:

The first reading response was very thoughtful, seeing as it was two paragraphs. I had read Amanda's draft of the final paper in class and had made a lot of comments about it. Between that draft and the one that I just read a few changes were made, the descriptions that were put in were very good, it helped me see what was happening in the story.

Me:

Looking through my imitation excersise I realise that my first imitation was very descriptive while my other two were based on a Sci-Fi show that I like. After looking through my papers I noticed that I use about the same amount of description and that in all of my essays I mentioned something about a British series. In the first papers I mentioned characters from Doctor Who and Torchwood, which I did in the third paper as well, and in the second paper I mentioned Harry Potter, in the third paper I mentioned Harry Potter twice. I like to write about the things I read and watch on TV or in movies.